Tuesday, 8 September 2015

Film Noir plan

Hey Diddle Diddle

Hey Diddle Diddle, the cat and the fiddle
The cow jumped over the moon
The little dog laughed to see such fun
and the dish ran away with the spoon.


Characters
"Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle" - detectives/policemen/investigators
"The cow jumped over the moon" - Someone jumps off a building
"The little dog laughed to see such fun" - the little dog is a child who pushes the person off the building but makes it look like a suicide: a distraction while the robbery takes place.
"and the dish ran away with the spoon" - someone robs something: bank/jewellers/bodies from a morgue
 - Wife
 - 19-year-old boy/son: Freddy
- Stuart: leader of the group


Plot

   The murderer calls the police department and the hands of the murderer is seen playing a recording tape of "Hey diddle diddle" leaving it as a clue.
   Policeman/detective gets call over walkie talkie saying someone has just commited suicide by jumping off a building. 
   Policeman/detective goes down to check it out.
   Alarm of another building nearby goes off but everyone is distracted by the "suicide." Finds recording tape and plays it "Hey diddle diddle..."
   A few hours later the same policeman/detective gets another call over the walkie talkie saying that someone has just robbed the bank/jewellers/morgue.
   Policeman/detective goes down to check out robbery. Finds recoding tape and plays it "hey diddle diddle..."
   Policeman/detective goes back to office and finds another recording tape and plays it "hey diddle diddle..."
   Policeman/detectives head snaps up to see the curtain of the window blowing and the shadow of someone jumping out the window (the policeman/detectives office is on the ground floor)
   Policeman/detective goes home to wife cooking dinner and 19 year old son watching an intense murder tv show. Asks son why he is watching that show and he claims it's for a 'task' he has to do.
   Wife says teacher called about freddy's behaviour
   Wife, Husband/detective and Freddy go in to speak to freddy's teacher
   voice over of teachers voice, over what freddy has been doing
   Freddy manipulating other students. Stuart was an exuberant student, but a couple days after Freddy's arrival, Stuart has been acting really strange --> as though scared/nervous
   Freddy and Stuart didn't get along at first but after a week or so Stuart was a slave for Freddy, he would do anything for him
   Freddy handing Stuart crowbar, bat etc. telling him to hit harder and to finish him off
   Stuart refuses to and says he can't. Stuart runs out of room and Freddy curses and says to professor "I'll get you, I will get you" and runs out of room after Stuart (end voice over)
   Freddy gets into car and chases after Stuart who is on foot. Freddy hits Stuart with car.
   In hospital, detective/Freddy's father asks Stuart who was driving what did he see? Stuart replies with "run, car, loud" Detective says "loud? what was loud? Stuart?" Stuart replies with "hey diddle"
    
College students threatening to kill professor because professor could ruin their career
CHANGE:
-No suicide ( *might have a mental health issue) 

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